Well, there's not much I can say about this submission except that it needs some tweaking and fixing up here and there. First of all, I have no idea what just happened, I saw a lot of sprites, but the dialogue passed just way too rapidly. Secondly, you used sprites. Sprites are extremely unoriginal and don't show any signs of creativity in an author of an animation, it shows laziness. Lastly, when you are displaying the transition of time, it's a white screen with hand written words, the credits are also hand written, on a blank frame. If you don't have straight, neat writing, then use the text tool, and add something more in the background.

Here is a summary of pros and cons:

Pros:
N/A

Cons:
- You used sprites
- Dialogue passed too quick
- No preloader
- "Transition of time" was sloppy

That's about it, good luck with your future projects.
- Credits were sloppy

Well, Tikislab, you certainly have the ability to create great graphics, but you need to find yourself a better concept. The game is just way too hard, I understand that it's meant to be this way, but there's a limit. I couldn't last more than a couple of seconds, but thats because I suck at these kinds of games. This game has so much potential to do better, and so do you. I'm not writing this review for you because I want you to feel bad, I'm writing it because I want to see you do better.

Here is a summarized list of the pros and cons that this game has:

pros:
- Nice graphics

cons:
-Very hard
-Not a very good concept

Tiki, here's a recommendation for your future projects. Before you release a game/animation, post a link to it on the newgrounds forums. You will get feedback and tips before you actually release the game, so when you actually get around to releasing the game, it will live up to your full potential. I look forward to seeing more submissions coming from you.

Very nicely done, Brokenfridge. For your first submission to newgrounds this was fairly impressive. The only things I would recommend that you improve for future submissions is your art and animation. Your art wasn't horrible, but that doesn't mean it doesn't require improvement. The animation, was choppy at some points and the entire "movie" felt like it was moving very slowly. Nonetheless, I enjoyed this submission very much. Nice concept, almost excellently executed.

Here are a list of the pros and cons this submission has, for future reference.

Pros:
- Nice concept
- Executed quite nicely

Cons:
-Choppy animating
-"Rough looking" art/drawings

You have much potential, keep up the great work.